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The Open Essay:
How to Organize the Open Essay:  Grades 9-12
and English Literature and Composition AP

Directions:  The following outline explains how to organize the writing of a timed essay question that requires an analysis of a specifically defined element of fiction.  Notice how this is not a formula that you force on any question, but a formula that changes based on the play or novel chosen.
Introduction:
1.  Use the first sentence or two to begin to identify how the element specifically defined in the question functions in the chosen novel or play.  Allude to something here that will be finished in the conclusion.
2.  In the next sentence or two, explain with clarity and precision how the author manipulates the language to portray the nature of the specifically defined element and the implication that this has for the meaning of the work as a whole.
3.  Include the following three items in your thesis:
        A.  Real Subject:Name the subject of your novel as directed by the
              question.
        B.  Inference:  What is your opinion (interpretation) about this subject?
        C.  Causations:  What are the shifts in meaning based on your inference
              about the subject?  These become the subdivisions of your essays.
              These become the topics for the topic sentences of each of the body
              paragraphs.  It is important here to show the ambiguity of the task
              in the way you define these causations.
Body:
4.  The topic sentence should define what the writer/speaker does first to advance the element specifically addressed in the question and now stated in the thesis).
5.  Find evidence in the part of the novel where the author advances the element specifically addressed in the question, previously stated in the thesis, and now mentioned in the evidence.   This evidence should do the following:  analyze what the author does and how the author does it. Name or define the literary choices made by the author to advance the element.  Remember that the question always directs you to do two things:  show the function of the element and the implications it has for the meaning of the work as a whole.
End each paragraph with an interpretation that addresses the significance of the author's purpose and evaluate his literary choices.
6.  Switch paragraphs when there is a shift in the second way in which the author chooses to advance to element.  Continue the same strategy as above for the next paragraph.
7.  Remember that the question always directs you to do two things:  show the function of the element and the implications it has for the meaning of the work as a whole.  The previous examples show how the element functions in the work.  The next paragraph analyzes the implications it has for the meaning of the work as a whole.
8.  The last body paragraph seems to continue the same strategy of the previous paragraph.
Conclusion:
7.  State your thesis in the form of a conclusion resulting from the evidence previously examined.
8.  Tie up the loose ends established in the introduction by making a conclusions about how the message of the work just analyzed applies to the overall human experience.
 

 

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